Pretty much perfect
These types of shorts are why newgrounds was created. Short, sweet, and funny.
One of the better flashes I've seen by someone who I don't know.
Kind of obvious
Totally saw that coming. *Porn* like this is now becoming as prevalent as rickrolling, except in flash animation. Funny, I guess.
Honestly, better than some of what shows up on NG these days. The syncing is a wee bit off, but pretty good. Now just put that to good use.
thank you ^^ i'm still learning how to do it properly. i'll try to improve on the next one.
Captured my attention span. Which is perfect for NG. Also, that semicolon bit was pretty good; considering in my last flash app I spent ~4 hours debugging to find that I was missing a semicolon. Heh.
Good animation, clean, especially the characters. But please, don't mislabel the rating (13+, 17+, etc.). That's why it's a six and not an eight. Also, add a useful title and description.
Considering this is the first animation you have made, not bad.
Missed some important parts of newgrounds, didn't properly explain the history of newgrounds, but better than nothing. Seriously, though, this can all be read in the forums and the faq.
More convenient than an FAQ, less work. Just sit and watch.
Pretty fucking good. I actually laughed out loud. Although you have said you won't make any more, considering the score given to this after, at this point, 2700 views, you should make another. Please.
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